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[Marko]

For a start it looks ok. Now you have to wait for blitz to give you the approval stamp, or ask you to improve something.

[Marko]

There are some typos, that you can improve. The best way is to write all your texts in MS Word or any "notes" program that has spelling check. This way you'll always have a well spelled text.

[Blitz]

Okay, first. He is waaaaaay to uber-strong for a starting character. I am okay with your own creation, but it should be on the same level as the other Leader characters that are posted. Here is the link to the Empire Leader Units, and try to get him to the same level. Mostly focus on the HP, the Wards, Immunities are huge (and poison and disease would basically make him immune to Death magic which is monsterous unless he's Undead) and limit it to one spell. Once we have him to a comparative level, I'll tell you how much he would cost. Also come up with a title or concept for the type of leader he is, something more specific than half and half. Like Forest Warrior, or something. I want to keep a list of approved units so others can select them. We'll get him in good shape.

[Blitz]

The reason why 'sword fighting' and/or 'axe fighting' or anything like a weapon proficiecy isn't an official skill is because the only Official Skills are the ones that affect a player v. player battle. Any and all characters can be proficient with a sword, or axe, or spear. Heck they can use bows and arrows without the Archery skill, just not in player v. player battles. If you want they can be mop proficient and smite demons with their trusty mop o' justice. All of that is up to you. All of the player stuff, weapons, attitude, appearance, is up to you. Your character can be a half human/half elf Archmage if that's what you want. He can be a half orc/half demon and still be an Archmage. I might ask for a decent reason in the background, but I'm fine with it.

Okay, everything looks fine on that end, with the exception that he starts with a Leadership of 3. You don't have to use it, but don't short change yourself. Since you are an Adventurer, and the Archmage costs only 3 points, you still have 22 points that you can spend. Look towards the bottom of this page for some of the stuff you can get, or you can pick up some more party members from either the Empire or the Alliance units. If you need more direction, let me know.

[Blitz]

Sorry I haven't responded to your earlier PM. My computer goes into fits whenever I try to send one back. If you want your character approved, then you're going to need to put it in the right format, so that everyone can see and tell the same information about it as you know. If you want my example it is here. Or another new player with a good character sheet is here. I would recommend just starting a new thread with the same name, and just putting in the information as you go (changing the names and information to match). That way I can tell you specifics rather than just give general suggestions. Go ahead an keep posting here and I'll keep responding.